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Please provide your feedback in a timely manner by commenting on released content, focusing on the following questions:

• Did you feel immediately engaged in the scene and story line? At what point did you feel the story really started?
• Was there any part where you felt bored? Which paragraphs?
• What emotions did you feel as you read? Were there any parts weak in making you feel, or particularly strong in making you feel?
• Were the characters’ behavior and development believable? What do you think of the characters?
• Were there any parts that were just plain confusing?
• Were there any parts that didn’t flow?
• Did the scene keep you engaged after the previous reading? How does the overall story pace feel?
• Are there lingering questions or plot holes?

Please do not concern yourself with minutia like grammar.

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